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    A creative drama that changes his son's vision

    Once there lived a rich and highly professional eye specialist name called Sunil who is having a son name called Mithun where the doctor's wife died after giving birth to his son, even though the doctor is young, he is reluctant to marry again because of his son's future. As there were a number of servants present in the doctor's house to look after the child so nurturing his child has not been a big task for the doctor. As Mithun is having lazy behavior always interested in playing video games in computers and smart phones, he always neglect his studies, Mithun father always worried about his son's future because he wants to make his son as a doctor, but his son always neglect studies and several times he ordered his son not to play video games and concentrate him on his studies, but Mithun never listened his father's words. As the days pass on once Mithun requested his father to buy him a 3d video game player that is a very costly gadget as a birthday gift Sunil replied that your birthday will be celebrated at the Hospital and promised that he will buy the gift. On the birthday day Mithun visited hospital along with his father, everybody(patients,patients relatives and staff) in the hospital showing respect to his father as a mark of respect they stand up from their seats and greets him this created a lot of respect and love on his father's profession. As there is a lot of time left to cut the birthday cake meanwhile his father giving treatment his patients Mithun observing carefully all these things after some time he felt bored he took his smart phone and started playing a video game suddenly some people entered into doctor room and crying in front of doctor as the doctor questioned what happened, then they said as my son is having a visibility problem and he is fond of playing video games, but now he is telling that he cannot be able visualize the things properly as, Mithun suddenly draws attention to those people and listening carefully what they are saying. As his father check the eyes of the patient and told your son's visibility gone and it will not be reverted back as the parents fall on the feet of the doctor to do something to get back the visibility, but the doctor says I am helpless. As the parents and patient were gone outside, Mithun emotionally asked his father why their son had lost the visibility the father replied due to eye strain the retina got damaged and there is no operation for that and immediately father has taken something from the bag that looks like a presentation gift box and given to Mithun , Mithun asked what is this? It is your birthday gift I had purchased 3d game player ,Mithun immediately put the presentation box in recycle bin and told his father I will never play video game and he also told that he wants to choose doctor profession as his career. As the father felt happy that his trick has worked, he created love on the doctor's profession and created hatred on playing video game to change his sons attitude by playing a drama in that he put his own hospital staff as an actors in that drama.
  • #587176
    Nice story! You pretty much covered up every emotion within it.

  • #587181
    A nice story with 'feel-good' factor. I like the creativity expressed by the author in this story. He should nurture the creativity and improve upon it.
    Caution: Explosive. Handle with care.

  • #587184
    I think I read this story earlier somewhere in this forum only. To me it appears like an old wine in a new bottle.
    No life without Sun ¤

  • #587197
    #587184 Yes, I make subtle changes of the previous version of the story which exists in the forum and put it here for the entry contest.
    A blunt knife or rusted knife can't be useful for anything just for the sake we call it as the knife similar to PayTM series or Sachin or Virat records.

  • #587248
    Some of the responses that I got when posted in the forum... Here are the testimonials...

    A good fictional piece crafted by the author as in real life it is generally not possible. The children addicted to playing video games find it almost impossible to totally abandon the same. --- Kailash..

    Wow what a nice story which reopened the stubborn attitude of Mithun and felt how bad when one looses the eyes by concentrating and playing video games. Surely children have great impact when they see things personally and feel the pain. --- Mohan

    A blunt knife or rusted knife can't be useful for anything just for the sake we call it as the knife similar to PayTM series or Sachin or Virat records.

  • #587258
    Bhushan,
    Why this repetition of story already existing in this forum? What purpose does it meet? Is it just for joy, for not having anything else to think? What ISC Editors have to say?

    No life without Sun ¤

  • #587260
    Sun,

    Its an opportunity to those who missed out to read this fascinating tale as I make subtle changes so that they will get an opportunity to read this... and which is an apt for the TOW topic too

    A blunt knife or rusted knife can't be useful for anything just for the sake we call it as the knife similar to PayTM series or Sachin or Virat records.


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