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    Till the Earth till she goes barren

    She gave birth to you
    From her bountiful womb
    Why did she raise you? To be defiled by you?
    Filling your belly by stabbing her breast
    Why are you growing? With pain earth is roaring?

    Now the situation seems dire
    Till her till her womb remains fertile
    Setting your motherland on fire
    You are aspiring to be extraterrestrial
    For you, the entire space is not enough!
    Because minerals and energy you love.
    Hungry for power. See how you've sunken lower.
    Desert the planet you called home
    because Earth has turned to dust.

    Countless species of animals you murdered.
    What are you breathing?
    Smoke and your toxins.
    Sucking from the ground of all it's moisture.
    I see a melting iceberg
    Kid you did a good work!

    Now the situation seems dire
    Till her till her womb remains fertile
    Setting your motherland on fire
    You are aspiring to be extraterrestrial
    For you, the entire space is not enough!
    Because minerals and energy you love.
    Hungry for power. See how you've sunken lower.
    Desert the planet you called home
    because Earth has turned to dust.

    Always kept fighting among yourselves
    Now you want to pollute whole universe.
    Establishing great cities
    Exploiting her generosity
    Just get it over. Instead of killing slower.
    You made a mile long spacecraft for yourselves
    Leaving behind, the rotting caracass of Earth.
  • #617555
    Great submission on the importance of mother earth and how one should help in keeping the eco balance in tact so that human beings and animals can co exist in future too.
    K Mohan
    'Idhuvum Kadandhu Pogum "
    Even this challenging situation would ease

  • #617563
    The author as usual shown his writing skills of Enfish poetry. This time he has taken the Earth as the subject. He simply narrated the undoings of the human beings to spoil the mother earth. He tried to explain how the mankind is spoiling the earth for their selfish motto. It is the time we should understand the importance of the earth and try to protect her from all the pains we are creating to her. Please see that we will not spoil the earth further. A good attempt from the young writer,
    drrao
    always confident

  • #617573
    An excellent narration of how man has been plundering Mother Nature for decades and still continuing at a relentless pace. We have moved past critical points wherein species have become extinct, underground water tables are dropping, major rivers are drying up, yet we are not bothered about conservation. we would reach a stage wherein man has to fight with each other for simple resources like water, land, and food in the future. We need to spread the message of conservation, aforestation and safeguarding our resources, this has to be done by all, countries big and small.

  • #617584
    An excellent poem depicting how human being is plundering Mother Nature. I am deeply impressed by the deepth of thought and the quality of the poems of the author. I would advise him to carefully preserve these poems and make sincere effort to publish these poems.
    Caution: Explosive. Handle with care.


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