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Posted Date: 21 May 2012 Posted By:: Pradeepraj R Member Level: Gold Member Rank: 145 Points: 10 (Rs 10)
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This is an entry for the creative poetry writing contest
|#318393 Author: Sun Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 14 Date: 21/May/2012 Rating: Points: 1|
Here you are. Well done. Your poem is full of here. It is nice to hear the here repeatedly.
ISC's Creative Sun and a Debater.
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Let us learn good English through ISC.
|#318429 Author: Kalyani Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 26 Date: 22/May/2012 Rating: Points: 1|
I think you need to follow the proper spacing in the poem to make it more poetic.
Thanks & Regards
|#318475 Author: Freddy Thomson Member Level: Gold Member Rank: 209 Date: 22/May/2012 Rating: Points: 2|
Simple and humble effort to make a nice poem and you have succeeded. It is really easy and nice to see that common language in a poem and so I like this poem for its simplicity. be sure that you can win and happy to see a good poem for the contest as entry. Keep up your creative works at ISc.
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|#319065 Author: Ajay Member Level: Gold Member Rank: 97 Date: 25/May/2012 Rating: Points: 1|
Good efforts. It is a nice and simple poem. Poem gives out clear picture of the ISC.
Best Luck for contest.
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|#319150 Author: Nadeem Naqvi Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 85 Date: 25/May/2012 Rating: Points: 3|
Yes, you have rightly mentioned the thing all are really here. You have written this poem in a different genre which is different from the other participants. It is nice to see you in this section which is showing that there are many members on this site who are really creative and have all the talent which can be brushed to much better if tried on.
All the best!
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|#319230 Author: Venkiteswaran. Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 20 Date: 25/May/2012 Rating: Points: 2|
I noted this entry now only. Somehow I missed it earlier. I liked the line "Past history, present here". It gives some pun on the opposite words Past and present.Best Wishes.
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