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Ghost story part III. Sun escapes temporarily |
Posted Date: 11 Aug 2012 Posted By:: Sun  Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 18 Points: 5
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Ghost story Part III – Sun escapes from Anamika temporarily.
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....Seeing Sun trembling, Anamika said ,"Sun, I will come tomorrow to know the progress of your platinum. Please relax today" and she left. Mr. Sun was in great dilemma, not knowing what to do, to cross 50000 and become platinum or to remain with 49999 as diamond. While thinking it very deeply his computer got packed up. Sun became very happy to see the non operational status of his desk top.
Next day midnight. When Anamika came, Sun was found sleeping tight. Anamika terrorized and woke up Sun. Sun got up and said," Sorry Ana, my desk top got packed up and I am not able to post anything. It will take another one month as the computer spares are not available ". Anamika said "OK, I will come to you after one month to see the progress, and I expect you to be platinum by that time. Mr.Sun got relaxed.
Next day,Sun made his desk top operational and when he logged on to ISC, he saw a great change introduced in the member ship levels. ISC announced that the pattern of member level has been changed as follows. Up to 100- bronze, upto 1000-Silver, 1001 to 10000–Gold, upto 20000 – Diamond, upto 30000 – Pearl, Upto 40000 - Coral, upto 50000 – Ruby, upto 60000 – Topaz, upto 70000 – Emerald, upto 80000- Blue Sapphire, upto 90000 – Cat's eye, upto 100000- Garnet, 100001 (one lakh)onwards –Platinum.
Sun jumped up and down and rejoiced the change at ISC. He kept cool .. He was extremely happy to have another 50000 points to reach platinum as per the latest change in ISC. He waited for Anamika to inform this.
After a month. Anamika came to Sun and asked," Hey Sun, Are you platinum now?. Sun laughed and said, "Sorry Ana, I need to score another 50000 to get into platinum". Sun explained about the change in membership level at ISC, to Anamika. Anamika got frustrated and told Sun," I will visit Web Masters Mr. Tony and Mr. Jose to condemn them for bringing this change. I will ask them to revert back to original member ship level. It is not fair at alll", and She left.
Same night, she went to Mr Jose . Mr. Jose was found sleeping with a long golden chain in his neck with a big cross as a pendant. Anamika could not near him because of the holy cross effect. Then she went to Mr. Tony. There too she saw a big cross similar to Mr. Jose's cross. Anamika could not go near the Web Masters. Then she tried to go to Vandana., the Managing Editor. She too was not approachable as she had a big cross at the entrance to her bed room. Anamika felt all in vain. She lost her hope of making changes to the new membership level at ISC.
By this time, Sun received a warning from ISC that few of his articles were copy pasted . Restriction was imposed on Sun's postings. Therefore, Sun stopped accepting articles from Anamika stating that Anamika copied articles from somewhere else and handed over to Sun. When Sun informed this to Anamika, Anamika felt sorry and asked apologies to Sun. She said,"Sun, you be as normal as you were earlier. I will still wait for you to achieve platinum level. Let any number of year pass. I am for Sun only. I can not think of someone else in my life". Sun was happy with her words but unhappy about his future.
Sun continued his membership at ISC, but he scored very less at an average of 10 points per day which took 5000 days(nearly 13.5 years)to reach platinum. Sun was extremely happy for 13 good years. Anamika restricted her visit to Sun. She appeared only once in a year to know the progress of Sun's membership level.
What happened after 13 good years...?
To be continued in part IV.
Members, Please post your comments and views here to develop my part IV.
Regards,
Hard work never fails to yield good results.
Creative Sun
ISC's 1st "CREATIVE" Badge Recipient
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#340677 Author:  Dr. Apurva Tamhane  Member Level: Gold Member Rank: 189 Date: 11/Aug/2012 Rating:  Points: 2 |
Poor Anamika! Ultimately she had to wait for 13.5 years to know something from Sun to marry him. But Ghosts are hard and fast on their words. They will either make you a ghost or will enter you to take a physical form and then will trouble some other people and will try to finish their incomplete tasks!
Regards,
Dr. Apurva A. Tamhane
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| #340703 Author: Sun Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 18 Date: 11/Aug/2012 Rating: Points: 1 |
Dr. Apurva,
Your first comment is very impressive and encouraging. You have given me a good hint to develop my story further. Hope other members also will give their good comment.
Regards,
Hard work never fails to yield good results.
Creative Sun
ISC's 1st "CREATIVE" Badge Recipient
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| #340801 Author: S.Rajee Member Level: Gold Member Rank: 467 Date: 11/Aug/2012 Rating: Points: 2 |
Mr.Sun,
Very nice to see your imagination and taking the story in line with ISC events. I thought you will bring an end to this ghost story. Interestingly you have taken us 13 years ahead and put a question mark. Very lovely creation by you. I am curious to see your part IV of ghost story.
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| #340814 Author: Beena Singh Member Level: Bronze Member Rank: 10862 Date: 11/Aug/2012 Rating: Points: 1 |
Great story! I hope that part iv will have many other twists and turns. hope that Sun gets rid of Anamika!
Regards
Beena Singh
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#340822 Author:  Madhvee Chaubey Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 28 Date: 11/Aug/2012 Rating: Points: 3 |
Finally, you are out from the hands of Anamika. Though it is only temporary, but, you will not have to worry for the next 13 years. And we know, you are quiet smart and will come out with a solution. But, I can give you an idea to be safe from Anamika. Similar to Jose and Tony sir, you should also place God symbol in your room. Then, Anamika would not be able to come near you.
Regards,
Madhvee
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| #340845 Author: Sun Member Level: Diamond Member Rank: 18 Date: 11/Aug/2012 Rating: Points: 1 |
Madhvee,
Thanks for the comments and suggestion to wear a God symbol. But Sun's family is dead against cross. Moreover Sun is interested in Anamika though she is a Ghost. She is extremely beautiful as God created her with special interest, and sun is in love with her with a hesitation to marry. Also Sun has promised to Anamika that he would not adapt any method to disassociate Anamika.
This story will take a serious turn in Part IV. just wait for it on 15th August. The day of independence is going to be a great surprise.
Regards,
Hard work never fails to yield good results.
Creative Sun
ISC's 1st "CREATIVE" Badge Recipient
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