Letting your thoughts to flow freely is fine but then they should be made to adapt the changes required for a piece of writing. Your thread was shifted to pending as it was not clear as to what you exactly wanted to convey. If my memory is not failing me, this point about the lack of clarity in your threads was earlier also brought to your attention through PMs.
This thread has been responded to as a one time measure. Threads asking for editing suggestions will not be encouraged.
“It is better to change an opinion than to persist in the wrong one." – Socrates