A tour that will be remembered forever (Part 2)
Krishna is happy and very active. He started packing the clothes and other needs for him for the tour. His parents, Prasad and Lakshmi, also started preparing for the tour. But Krishna's sister, Anitha, is not very active and feels weak. So, she asked Krishna to help her by packing her clothes also.All the things are set and the taxi came to pick them up and drop them at the railway station. The tour started. They reached the railway station and Krishan is very happy as he is travelling by train for the first time. He is eagerly waiting for the train to come.
The train came on time and they got on the train. On the train, in the same reserved coupe another couple, Mohan and Surya, are there and they are also going to Tirupathi. The two families started talking with each other. Mohan is very happy by seeing the enthusiasm of Krishna. Meanwhile, Anitha started feeling inconvenient and she had a fever again. Lakshmi is very worried. Prasad gave his daughter medicine brought with him as per the suggestion of his doctor
All this is observed by Mohan and Surya. Mohan asked prasad what is the issue. Prasad told the whole story and showed the medicine he has given. Mohan said that he is a doctor. He opened his box and took out the stethoscope and examined Anitha and gave her medicines. He said that nothing to worry about and assured them that by the time they land in Tirupathi, she will be alright. Prasad is now very much relieved as a doctor will be with them during the train journey.
Surya is a very religious lady and has a belief in God. She looked at the girl and told Lakshmi that the hair of the girl is very nice and asked her to pray to God to see that her temperature will come down and also asked her to get the girl tonsured in Tirumala. Accordingly, Lakshmi prayed and offered to tonsure her daughter if the fever comes down by the time, they reach Tirupathi. Slowly the girl went to sleep and by early morning she has become normal. Prasad thanked Mohan for his help. Lakshmi thanked Surya for her advice and thanked God also for the timely help. Their pilgrimage went off very well.
This is the sequel to my story
A tour that will be remembered forever
and entry to the sequel writing chance
Flash Fiction creative writing - re-opening the sequels