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    Three trained camels are crossing the International Border (IB) [Part-III]

    (Continued from Part-II)

    First, a decoy operation would be launched to lure the terrorists into revealing their position. A convoy of BSF vehicles, resembling a regular patrol, would move along a known smuggling route. Meanwhile, another team would set up an ambush at a strategic point along the IB, close to where the camels were expected to cross. Karim Bux, who knew the terrain and the local smuggling networks better than anyone, would guide the ambush team.

    As the sun set, casting long shadows over the desert, the operation commenced. The convoy set out, their headlights cutting through the sand, while the ambush team, including Karim Bux and the 2IC, moved stealthily to their designated location. Every man was alert, their ears tuned to the faintest sound over the howling winds.

    Hours passed in tense silence. The night grew darker, the desert's chill biting through their uniforms. Just as fatigue began to set in, a low rumble echoed through the night. The convoy had reached the area where the terrorists were suspected to be hiding. Suddenly, gunfire erupted, cutting through the silence like a knife. The terrorists had taken the bait. The sound of artillery being mobilized confirmed it: the decoy operation was working.

    At the ambush site, the BSF soldiers waited patiently, their eyes scanning the horizon. Then, in the dim light, they spotted movement. A line of camels, almost invisible against the sandy backdrop, was approaching the border. Karim Bux signaled, and the BSF soldiers took their positions. The camels drew closer, and soon, the outlines of their handlers became visible—armed men, their silhouettes dark against the night sky.

    The ambush was swift and decisive. BSF opened fire, targeting the handlers and forcing the camels to halt. Startled, the camels brayed and reared, but the BSF soldiers moved in quickly, securing the animals and their cargo. As the dust settled, it became clear just how close they had come to a disaster. The camels were loaded with packets of high-grade heroin and crates of weapons, including automatic rifles and explosives.

    The interrogation of the captured handlers revealed the full extent of the plot. The drugs were intended to fund terrorist activities, while the weapons were meant for a series of coordinated attacks on border posts and civilian areas. The simultaneous artillery engagement, a diversion, would have allowed the camels to slip across the border and unleash havoc.

    With the operation successfully concluded, the BSF had not only thwarted a major drug trafficking route but had also dismantled a significant terrorist network. The captured evidence provided critical intelligence that would aid in future operations. The cooperation of local informants like Karim Bux had proved invaluable, highlighting the importance of human intelligence even in the age of satellites and drones.

    As dawn broke over the desert, the BSF Commander's gaze fell upon the horizon. The camels, once instruments of danger, now stood tethered, their burden lifted.

    Operation Desert Mirage was successful. The IB was secure for the time being, but the desert would always be a place of shadows and secrets, demanding eternal vigilance.





    [Concluded. This is a story devloped in my creative brain: Please don't try to find any similarity with any real event.]
  • #782038
    That is an excellent finish. Our soldiers did a great job and they can spoil the plans of our enemies and protect the country from a disaster. Eventhough it is a creative story, I feel that the Indian defence is capable of finding such attempts in real life also. I appreciate the author for his creativity.
    drrao
    always confident

  • #782055
    Well written. A good piece of creative writing. Our forces have sometimes to take such actions in reality when there is intelligent information about such movement of drugs and arms etc across the border.
    Knowledge is power.

  • #782157
    If I want to publish this story of mine or any other creative story posted earlier by me, what should I do? Am I required to take prior permission from the Webmaster or Managing Editor of ISC?
    (a) Those who have forgotten Noakhali, how can they protest Sandeshkhali?
    (b) Have no fear of perfection - you'll never reach it. ---------- Salvador Dali

  • #782158
    As far as I know, once published on this site, we can't post it on any other site, Parths Sir. In the same way, articles published elsewhere can't be published here. However, you need not take it for granted and you can wait some official announcement from the people who have authority on this subject. I request you to kindly suggest any site which is available for us to publish our content other than Quara.
    I request other members also to suggest some sites where we can place our content. Thank you all in advance.

    drrao
    always confident

  • #782159
    I had asked in another post(response) if any of our ISC member who has sufficient technical knowledge in this regard open a blog/site and run it for the current active ISC forum-ites to have some interaction without causing damage to that blog/site and using it properly and continuing.

    I think the issue of objection to our own articles elsewhere may come only if it is used for monetization and there will not be any problem if we properly give credits to the original site where it was published originally. (I am open for correction in this regard)

    I again suggest/request some member having technical and needed knowledge to open a blog/site (without incurring cost)and run it just for decent civil interaction and opinion posting for facilitating the current active ISC members to continue their virtual link and connection.

    I am aware that there is/are WhatsApp groups initiated by some erstwhile members. but there can be limitations for membership in them. That also can be explored.

  • #782161
    Most probably, I could not explain my previous response (#782157) properly. I am not seeking permission to publish some of my worthless writings in any other site. I am planning to publish these in a book or e-book after my retirement. My query on seeking permission was in that context.
    (a) Those who have forgotten Noakhali, how can they protest Sandeshkhali?
    (b) Have no fear of perfection - you'll never reach it. ---------- Salvador Dali


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