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    Let us try to write a sequel

    Long back, I wrote a Forum post on micro-short stories. In that post, I mentioned about Ernest Hemingway's micro-short story of six words, which has now become world-famous. In that post, I also wrote about the shortest horror story.

    The shortest horror story was written in 1948 by Frederick Brown. Brown was a lesser-known American writer and I have not read any of his other creations. The shortest story written by Frederick Brown is: "The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door ...". The story has only seventeen words.

    Now, the challenge is to write a sequel to this story. I have written one. My story goes like this: "Astonished by the knock on the door, the last man on Earth opened it. His faithful dog entered." My sequel contains eighteen words.

    I request the creative members of ISC to write a more apt sequel to this shortest horror story.
  • #782413
    My sequel-
    Before he could get up to answer it, the door opened by itself.

    When you make a commitment, you create hope. When you keep a commitment you create trust! ~ John C. Maxwell

  • #782415
    My sequel is as follows -
    Fear gripped him but soon door opened and an alien figure appeared. A small spaceship was landed in the front of the house.

    Knowledge is power.

  • #782416
    My sequel is as follows, he was thinking about who could it be, and a man landed in the room
    drrao
    always confident

  • #782417
    My sequel:
    Suddenly opened his eyes while still in a sitting posture. It was a dream.

  • #782419
    My sequel:
    His ex-wife whom he thought was dead stood outside with a bouquet showing "Memorial Day"

  • #782421
    An angel waiting outside with a floweri chariot to take him to heaven.

    This is my continuation aka as sequel.

    shasthranaam Ganitham moordhanisthitham

  • #782427
    My sequel sentence -

    "Why can't we happily live here , now the Hell & Heaven are totally filled making another Earth ? ", she asked.

    Regards,
    Jagdish

  • #782434
    My attempt-
    Blood oozed from her eyes as she burst into a laughter showing her blood coated fangs.

    'Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all'.
    -Aristotle

  • #782435
    Most respectfully I submit that both Jagdish Patro Sir and Saji Ganesh Sir are making a mistake to write the sequel. I request both to read the main post carefully.

    Thank you.

    (a) Those who have forgotten Noakhali, how can they protest Sandeshkhali?
    (b) Have no fear of perfection - you'll never reach it. ---------- Salvador Dali

  • #782437
    Apologies. I did read the main thread and the sequels that followed. I wrote my sequel in continuation to that of Jagdish which is probably continuation of the submission by Bhuvan.
    Got your point. I will submit a fresh sequel.

    'Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all'.
    -Aristotle

  • #782438
    My sequel:

    His faithful dog started barking and jumped onto the chariot.

    Sankalan

    "Life is easier when you enjoy what you do"

  • #782439
    My sequel
    Door opened, two glowing bulbs moving in the darkness. Oh! suddenly jumped inside with a thud, "a frightened black cat."

  • #782441
    My sequel-
    He opened the door to be shocked by a crater in front.

    'Educating the mind without educating the heart is no education at all'.
    -Aristotle

  • #782447
    My sequel-
    The crater in the front was huge and in the shape of the paw of the dog.

    “The most important thing in life is to learn how to give out love, and to let it come in." — Morrie Schwartz

  • #782448
    I request the Managing Editor or any other Editor to lock this thread. I could not explain the challenge to many members.
    (a) Those who have forgotten Noakhali, how can they protest Sandeshkhali?
    (b) Have no fear of perfection - you'll never reach it. ---------- Salvador Dali


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