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    Story:The Silent Sting

    In a small, remote village, there lived a deeply impoverished man named Nayar. He lived with his wife and their four young children in a modest hut, struggling relentlessly to make ends meet. As daily wage labourers, Nayar and his wife worked exhausting hours from dawn to dusk just to secure their basic bread and butter.

    It was a bleak and gruelling time for the family, and every single day was a raw battle for survival. Witnessing his friend's desperate struggle, a close companion offered Nayar a piece of advice. "Go visit the village temple," the friend suggested. "Pour milk into the snake pit there as an offering. It will please the deities and help you overcome these overwhelming financial hardships."

    Desperate for any glimmer of hope, Nayar listened to his friend's counsel. He walked to the temple and devoutly poured milk directly into the opening of the snake's nest. As the days progressed, an unexpected turn of fortune took place. Nayar suddenly began securing employment much more easily than before, and his earnings grew rapidly. Wholeheartedly convinced that this sudden luck was a direct blessing from the snake deity, Nayar's family began visiting the temple frequently, always bringing fresh milk to pour into the pit. Before long, Nayar's life was entirely transformed. He was earning excellent money, his children were finally able to attend a proper school, and he quickly became one of the wealthiest men in the village. He purchased a grand house and a car.

    With his accumulated wealth, he also started a financing business, lending money on interest to other villagers who were struggling. Out of immense gratitude, Nayar established a brand-new company and proudly employed the very friend who had originally advised him to visit the temple. Seeing Nayar's magnificent success, the friend approached him yet again. "All this sudden prosperity is solely due to the divine snake you worshipped," the friend noted. "If you bring that snake from the temple pit directly into your household, its presence will ensure permanent good fortune for both of you." Nayar, completely blinded by his sudden riches and intense devotion, readily accepted the suggestion.

    They hired an experienced local snake catcher to capture the serpent from the temple grounds. Inside a locked room in Nayar's new home, they constructed an indoor mud pit and placed the snake inside. Every single morning, the family performed elaborate rituals, poured milk into the pit, and fed the snake eggs. Once the rituals were complete, they would securely shut the heavy wooden door of the room. Soon, the snake laid a clutch of eggs inside the indoor enclosure.

    Around the same time, the oppressive summer heat began to bake the house, causing the clay foundation of the indoor snake pit to dry out and fracture with deep cracks.

    As the peak of summer arrived, the intense heat and heavy humidity caused the wooden doors of the house to absorb moisture and swell. The doors expanded so severely that they no longer fit easily into their frames, making them incredibly difficult to shut tightly. One night, exhausted from the suffocating heat, the family left the room door unlocked and slightly ajar because it wouldn't close properly. As an act of regular devotion, the entire family—Nayar, his wife, and their four children—chose to sleep on the cool floor, added to that, there was a power cut at night.

    In the dead of night, One of the children woke up in the dark and whispered to her mother, "Mother, something is stinging me." The mother, half-asleep, replied, "Do not worry, my child, it must be a mosquito." Soon, one by one, every child complained of the exact same sharp, piercing sensation. Blinded by their faith, the parents completely dismissed the cries.

    Even Nayar felt a sharp bite on his skin, but he remained silent, assuming it was nothing more than a routine mosquito bite. They all drifted back to sleep. The next morning, Nayar's friend arrived at the house. When he stepped into the room, he stood frozen in absolute horror. The mother and all four children were lying perfectly still on the floor, lifeless, with white foam bubbling from their mouths. Nayar was the only one left alive, but he was completely paralysed and on the very verge of death. The panicked friend rushed Nayar to the nearest hospital. As the medical staff scrambled to administer emergency treatment, Nayar, using his final, agonising breaths, confessed the entire terrifying sequence of events to the local police. Moments later, Nayar also succumbed to the poison and passed away.

    The entire village was left deeply shocked, stunned, and mournful. Promptly alerted by the authorities, forest officers and expert snake catchers arrived at the estate. They carefully swept the house, safely captured the mother snake along with all her offspring, and released them far away into the safety of the deep forest, where they truly belonged.
  • #783828
    A nice story. Bringing the snake God into the house and keeping it in a closed place is a foolish thing for the family.
    There is a place called Mallvaram in Andhra Pradesh. In that village, a real snake used to come to a Siva Temple, bind itself around the Siva Linga, and give Darshan to devotees. The priest of the temple used to worship the snake, and after completing the worship, the snake used to go back to its place. The place became very famous. After many years, the snake died. But even today, the temple is very famous, and couples who are not having children visit this place to worship the snake, God. The devotees again visit the temple after getting their wish fulfilled.

    drrao
    always confident

  • #783829
    #783828 Thank you for the response

  • #783830
    It was a real story that happened 25-30 years back in North India. I read it in a newspaper. I made subtle changes to it to make it a story. The original plot really happened; added some characters and some sequences to pen a story.

  • #783831
    This is a true event: Angry Santosh Lohar
    Kabhi un mad-bhari ankhon se piya tha ek jaam, aajtak hosh nehi, hosh nehi, hosh nehi—Jigar Moradabadi ("Once I drank a cup from those drunken eyes; till now I haven't regained my senses!")

  • #783832
    #783831 Not this. What you actually quoted actually happened 25 years ago... the exact baseline of the story...

  • #783833
    People are there as mentioned by the author. Everything has a limit. We cannot change our house as temple at the same time we cannot treat the temple as our house. There are certain sanctum sanctorum . I have seen a big snake house in a room of a house where an old lady only living in the another room of the house, telling that the snakes would come and go without hindering others. This house was seen by me in the village of Polagam,near Nagappattinam, Tamilnadu.

  • #783834
    #783831 Thank you for the response...

  • #783836
    Furthermore, for clarification, I remember a small black snake under the mat, which was dead. A picture was also shared as an inset. Newspaper.


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